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(NO FLUFFINESS DON'T SHOOT ME!!!!)

When you woke up, sometime late at night, Ivan was there, sitting on the bed, watching you, the moon shining down on your face. You still clutched the sunflower in your hand.

"You're back…" you mumbled, guiltily happy. "And Feli… Ludwig…?"

"They're not in the house anymore. The police was still unable to identify the murderer. The only thing they know for a fact is that it was the same person's doing."

"I… That was… It was just so ho-horrible, and at my place, too... There… There won't be anymore murders, I hope…"

Ivan stared at you, a hint of darkness in those bewitching eyes. "Lovino and Antonio are gone."

You stared, dumbfounded. "Re—Really?" you said in a small voice.

"Yes." The darkness in his eyes grew more profound. "There will not be any more murders, I think. After tonight, at least."

"How… How do you know?" An unexplainable fear started to grip your body, but nothing was going to happen; this was Ivan, the only one you've ever loved, the one you could trust…

He smiled down at you again, that smile that had comforted you after the death of all your friends, but there was something a bit off about it this time… No, you would not think that, this was Ivan… His words from earlier today rang through your head again; Trust me…

Ivan bent his head down and kissed you; the deepest one that you had shared with him so far. Then, he unwound his scarf, and before you could fathom what he was doing, he had tied it around your mouth, tight.

"MMPHMM!" you screamed, but his scarf muffled it all.

"You see, I've been searching for one for so long, ___________." The dark, malicious gleam in his eyes grew stronger by the second. "A heart. Mine falls out sometimes, and I haven't been able to find it recently."

No, no, no, this couldn't… This wasn't happening. This was IVAN. You were just imagining it… Weren't you?

"Arthur's wasn't right. It was too focused on you, and too cold on the outside, but strangely warm on the inside. Then I thought Alfred's might work, so I got him while he was preparing for the funeral—didn't know that he was getting roses, not sunflowers though. Anyways, Alfred's was too focused on himself. But they showed so much 'kindness,' I think it's called, to you, but still-- their hearts weren't right. Then Francis came along, and I thought that maybe his would work, but no. It didn't. There was too much 'feeling' in it. Then that day Feliciano came in, blubbering, shedding… What's it called again? Tears? Right, tears. I thought maybe his heart would be suitable, what with his affection for that Ludwig, so I took Ludwig's heart for good measure, but it didn't work out either; theirs were too focused on each other, not to mention that Feliciano's heart was quite childish. 'Maybe it was a genetic thing or something,' I thought, so I just went over to his brother Lovino's, where Antonio was, also. Neither of them was fitting; it was the same thing with Feliciano and Ludwig's—they had already belonged somewhere, to each other. I think I finally know the answer though. I finally know what it is. Love. Even though I don't have one of those 'hearts.' I love you, _____________. And I know you love me. I've found a place where your heart belongs. So dasveedanya. Good-bye. I'll love you always. And you'll love me, too. I'll make sure of it. Trust me."

The last thing you can remember is a steady chant of "Kolkolkol," as a sharp knife carefully cut out a hole in your chest, where your heart was located.
THE END!!! I hope you all enjoyed it, even if it's quite depressing... ^^" please don't shoot me...


Chapter 1 [link]
Chapter 2 [link]
Chapter 3 [link]
Chapter 4 [link]
Chapter 5 [link]
Chapter 6 [link]
Chapter 7 [link]
Chapter 8 [link]
Chapter 9 [link]
Chapter 10 [link]
Chapter 11 [link]
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:iconlightstarrrr:
Lightstarrrr Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Russia, wwwwwwwwhyyyyyyyyyy
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:iconhetalialover9001:
Still a better love story than Twilight.
YUSH SPAMANO
I thought that he'd be killing off all of Reader-chan's friends because he wanted to be Reader-chan's only friend, just like Reader-chan was his only friend. Ah well. *shrugs*
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Darkened-Innocence Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student General Artist
I Knew IT.
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CherryPuppy45 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
.....whoa....
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Istoleurcookies4o8 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg awsome sauce :D
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SharkyTheGreatWhite1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
YAY! I died! Finally I die-...... Wait what?! o,e''
((I might have some problems XD Holy shit this story is epic!))
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LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
When Ivan left right before the last chapter I was like "B-but I don't wanna die." When I read he had left I knew he was the killer but I didn't hardly expect him to kill me to...so much for not wanting to die. haha, this is an amazingly good story! Keep up the awesome work vivtheviolinist!
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eekoh472 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG I LOVE THIS SERIES ouob great job~!
made me laugh for some odd reason
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
... Creepy... But still very well written. I just would like to advise you use more details so the feelings are almost real.
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:iconthenurse1913:
TheNurse1913 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
YAY!! Finally some one put meh out of mah misery! He knew what I wanted!!
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VB-lurvs-gummy-bearz Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
............

At times like these, there is only one thing to be said.

:iconinomitplz:YAY FOR SADISM!!!
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:iconmeena788:
meena788 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist
omfg..... eek! its a good thing i read this in the daytime!
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:iconuchihaonkei99:
uchihaonkei99 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
T-T dude..that was sad..but great story though! I wouldn't have been able to come up with this X3
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RussiaGermanyFangirl Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icongunplz: :iconcryingplz:

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PrincessPeasant Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
AHHHH WGNRED;GHJKDHGJNSDKHJBF;F!!LSEKGJD;KGH!!!
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SilverSongAlchemist Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are fabulously sick and twisted. Well done my friend.
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AutumnWolfe Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This maybe weird but i think its lovely *smiles and giggles*
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^ I don't find it weird when people think my work is lovely! xD
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Patamongirl Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
.........
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Kulubot Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww mah gaaawsh so epic!! Perfectly gory, too, so I really likey~
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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whitekawaiitiger Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG, this is such an awesome horror story :D, i luv this horror story so much. aaaaah so awesome :D
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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:iconwhitekawaiitiger:
whitekawaiitiger Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ur welcome :D
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:iconkeikasate:
keikasate Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student General Artist
you are awesome at writing horrr storys! like , Prussia awesome! i loved this seris!
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! ^^ Glad you enjoyed :)
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:iconkeikasate:
keikasate Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student General Artist
no prob, i have a hard time finding ones without to much fluff so this made my day.
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kittara-jaganshi Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was quite the interesting story. :XD: Killed by Russia... I'm gonna come back an haunt 'em for that. lol
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need-ta-learn Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
I KNEW IT!!!
Ivan, as much as I love you, My sOUl wIll CoMe bAck UnD pUNIsh yOu...
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MagickTouchBassist Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw. I died by Russia again. This is the second time he has killed me in a reader insert! The first time he ate me because he "loved me so much and didn't want anyone else to have me and he wanted me to become one with mother Russia". Now, he stole my heart, literally. Haha! This was awesome even though I died.
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading :)
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:iconamandamp101:
Amandamp101 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
damn you russia... but I still fucking love you xDDDD
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NagamiChan122 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Meh i still love russia no mater what OwO
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Kitsune693 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
I f*cking knew it! Creepy... and awesome... And right now I've got the Dead Silence theme going through my head, oddly fitting...
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha... Thanks for reading~ :)
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:iconkitsune693:
Kitsune693 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
You're welcome~! It was a very enjoyable story, in a weird way...
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LDDandMRH4ever Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: Ivan! How could you do such a thing!? To all my friends and in the end, me!? Why!!?? I TRUSTED YOU!!!

Omg, this was so insteresting and I love it! :dummy: Besides the fact that Ivan killed me in the end, it was amazing! :la:
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thank you for reading~ ^^'
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LDDandMRH4ever Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :la:

Russia: Very intersting story, da? Never knew I was really like that on the inside. *smiles* Kol,kol,kol,kol.......:stab:
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IAmTheBlackbird Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...Ivan, I love you, but you seem to have figured that out...in a quite depressing way. Now let me vent:
:iconcryforeverplz::iconcryforeverplz::iconcryforeverplz::iconcryforeverplz: WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????????? I WOULD HAVE LOVED YOU FOREVER EVEN THOUGH YOU KILLED EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!! ...unless he kept their bodies in the house, that would creep me out too much.


One of the comments on here has inspired me. I might write a sequel to this... if you don't mind, that is.
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just give me the proper credit if you do, but out of curiosity, how are you going to write this sequel?
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:iconiamtheblackbird:
IAmTheBlackbird Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It would have to do with the reader's spirit. Oh, Ivan would pay. :evillaugh:

But I have like 5 stories to write, so this'll have to sit in the back for a while. But if I do get around to it, I'll definitely credit you.
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright; good luck!
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queenalexand Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sniff sniff.... but i don't wanna die :'(
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Russiasgurl Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O... i'm not quit shure what i just read.....
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iCatz Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
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Great! . . . Ya'll Readers till' There? ^^
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for reading ^^
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iCatz Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
Welcome.
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soulmadnesslove Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooooh!!!This fic makes my day!!
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:iconvivtheviolinist:
vivtheviolinist Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, thanks ^^
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